Poetry

Riang

Lungngaia rûm
Lungchhiaa insûm
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Thlarau rethei leh riangvai
Thlantui fîmin a bual leh a hual
Thinlung baihvai leh beidawng chu

Sianga riang tura piang
Nun hlimna zawnga ûmtu
Nung tura thih hreh tlat chu

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Awm lo atâ lo awmin
Awm atâ a awm ta lo

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55 comments

loneeagle26016 June 2, 2011 at 10:05 PM

1 Van phuah thiam ve ! Khitiang khi poetical term lamah khan enge kan vuah ang ? Sonnet form ani si lova..ka va chiang ta love…. 🙂

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kilung June 2, 2011 at 10:10 PM

Tawi THA tek tok ve aw…

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Malawma June 2, 2011 at 10:16 PM

Post tupa chu van thiam ve a. HAHA chuah maw thiam ka lo ti tep hman che a lawm. (Y)

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Ozima June 2, 2011 at 10:17 PM

A awmzia ka hrethiam em le!!!!! :-S :-S :-S :-O

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Rumtea June 2, 2011 at 10:19 PM

A va mawi e, hetiang deuh hi hmanah phuah ka tum tawh.he he

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Remenhoy 8teen June 2, 2011 at 10:38 PM

“sianga” tih omzia k hrelo tlat.

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CFL June 2, 2011 at 10:39 PM

(I) (Y) (I)

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H.Vangchhia June 2, 2011 at 10:40 PM

TS, I tlawr thiam ve khawp mai, a vai kal haw purh mai thin hairehai 🙂

Mahse thil pakhat, “Siang” hi enge i hman chhan? zawt mai2

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Ozima June 2, 2011 at 10:56 PM

Siang=In(home) ni mai em? sianga riang tura piang = Ina rethei tura piang 😛 , a thluk a rem, awmzia erawh a nei em em lemlo em aw ka lo ti mai mai a. 🙂

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H.Vangchhia June 2, 2011 at 11:11 PM

Ozima, “Siang” tih hi ka hriat sual loh chuan sikul emaw thil zirna hmun sawina deuh bik niin ka hria. Lai (Pawi) tawng atanga lak niawm tak ani bawk, tun thlengin Lai tawng tuallengah hman ala ni.

Eg: Siang kaina = Sikul luhna.

TS in lo hawlo sela, ka buai deuh mawle :-S

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Ozima June 2, 2011 at 11:18 PM

@HV: Poetical word ka hre vak lo, sikul pawh chu dik zawk mai thei. In pawh a dik tho ka ring: e.g “Ti ti ik ik ka bawhar zaitin thiam an” (Pi Nuchhungi?) tihah kha chuan Ar a in a lawi sawinan “siang lawi” a hmang in ka hria. “Mahriakte’n ar ang ka vai e parte” (Lalzova) khatah pawh khan in a haw sawi nan “siangah an lawi mi hraileng zawng te” tih a hmang leh a, a dik ve tho chu ka ring. 🙂

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TuaiSialA June 2, 2011 at 11:27 PM

Nia, kei pawh a tirah ‘siang’-ah ka buai a. Ka ziah hmain kan college Mizo lecturer hnênah ka zawt a. ‘An’ tihna a ni e a ti. Entirnan, ‘siang lawina rûn’ tih a nih chuan ‘an lawina rûn’ tihna a ni. Tin, poetry leh hla lampang chi-ah reng reng a phuahtuin zalênna zau tak a nei a, dik lova lo puh ngawt theih a ni lo tiin min hrilh bawk.

Khitah khi chuan a hmanna a rem vak lo. Mahse, a wordplay/rhyme a tha si a, a awmzia a bo thak chuang lo nen, ka hmang lui ta a ni.

A awmzia chu ‘an riang tura piang’ tihna a ni. ‘A mi an riang maw..’ tihte pawh kan nei tho kha mawle..

@loneeagle: Poetical term-ah chuan ballad rawng a kai ber. Bithliah leh term nei rèn rûn nei lova ka ziah mawp mawp a ni e.

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H.Vangchhia June 2, 2011 at 11:28 PM

Siang ah an lawi mi hrai zawng te = Mi fate chu sikul an kal/lut asin mawle!

Rûn: in (house)
Siang: Sikul (School)
Siang lawi: sikul kal
Siang kaina: Sikul luhna
Siang lawina rûn: sikul emaw sikul in (building)

Ni ngeiin ka hria 🙂

Duhlian tawng upa hi Falam tawng tualleng, Falam hlathu/tawng upa hi Halkha lam tawng tualleng.

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muantea June 2, 2011 at 11:28 PM

Siang chu ‘in’ tihna mai a ni. ‘Siang lawi’ a nih chuan ‘ina lut/haw’ tihna a ni.

Tuaisiala hi Mizotawng a thiam khawp mai, zawm tur a zawm kim thap lehnghal, Poem tawi tha tak a la ni zui. Critical analisys pek dan tur pawh ka hre love.

@loneeagle, khitiang poem khi chu Free Verse an ti mai. Rhymme scheme, arrangement leh meter lam ngaihtuah vak a ngai lem lo. Thu inlalawn mawi deuh erawh a hlu. Kei pawh free verse lam hian ka lung a len ber mai. Mizotawng ngat phei chuan dan dik tak zawma Sonnet ziak ka la hmu lo (kei tih loh chu 🙂 hehe)

Tuaisiala hian a rem uluk bawk sia, thing buk pawh a ang alawm, chuvangin Tree poem pawh tihsak mai ila 🙂

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H.Vangchhia June 2, 2011 at 11:36 PM

muante #14 “Siang lawi” kan ngaihtuah chianga a ni thei viau mai tak a!

“Vawiin chung turni thang vanzawl a her laiin, hman a ka di siang a lawi ka hmu. Mo thar tiin an lawm…” tih te pawh a awm tak alawm mawle. hairehai 🙂

Ka inzir belh zel e (Y)

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TuaiSialA June 2, 2011 at 11:42 PM

Pu Muantea: Ka lawm lutuk e. I rawn sawifiah a, a chiang ta kuarh mai. A la dik thei zawk zui! Kan lecturer chuan a lo hre fuh chiah lo a nih dawn chu. Ka post dawn avangin ka zawt ve ngat kha a nia.

Pu Hv, ka fiamthu blog kha i hman chuan va lut chhin rawh. Video hairehai deuh ka dah a nia. http://www.fiamthuhuang.blogspot.com.

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loneeagle26016 June 2, 2011 at 11:44 PM

#12, Tuaisiala, nia , a form lam khi ka lo buai deuh a, a category ah khi chuan metaphysical lam a pawl dawn anih khi ! I bei nalh khawp mai. (Y)

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Ozima June 2, 2011 at 11:45 PM

@TS: siang = an tih chu ka vawi kat hriat na, kan var eh ta uar mai. thanks.

@HV: Lalzova hi chuan In sawi nan a hmang em aw chu ka la ti fan, “Chung tura Ni a herliam zantlaiah, Siangah an lawi mi hraileng te zawng, kei chu khawiah nge siang ka lawi ang, thangvan chhawrthla eng mawi hnuaiah maw ni….” tih hi chuan In a sawi chuan ka hria. A lungleng zan khaw tai rek thleng thlenga a van ruai chungchang a phuahna,a damloh phah ta hial a, khami avanga lungleng a thi a ngaih a ni ta hial niin ka hria. Ar pawh sikul chu kai awm loh tak 😛 , mahse hmun dangah chuan sikul pawh chu a diktho ka ring. Tin Run pawh sawina dang leh ni maiin ka hria, Sawi tawh angin poetical word ka hre em em lova, sakei seh chu ka ngam biklo a nia 😛 Hlathu ka ngaihthlak chhung in @muantea alo lang e, a hming ka lam dawn a, zanin a reh em a ka lam chhuak ta lem lova…. (Y)

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H.Vangchhia June 2, 2011 at 11:45 PM

TS (Y) 😛

Ozima #14 & #15 🙂

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muantea June 2, 2011 at 11:53 PM

HV, i hla rawn sawi khian ka lung a tileng, kan sa ve nasa thei
‘Vawiin chungturni thangvan zawla a her laiin,
Hmana ka di siang lawi ka hmu.
Hmana ka di siang a lawi e, tlei dang run belin,
Mo thar tiin an lawm’

TS, Ballad rawng a kai i tih khi a dik thei tho nain, ballad atan chuan a tawiin a brief mah mah a ni.

Zanin zet chu ka net a va muang tak em! Satel kawthalo speed!

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Ozima June 2, 2011 at 11:56 PM

Comment 14-naah khian TuaiSiala de post-tupa khian “Ami an riang maw” tih khi ‘An’ sawifiah nan a rawn telh zeuh a, khi pawh khi ‘AN’ (they/them) sawina ni lovin an (ri sang/ri chho) (for) sawina a ni zawk in ka lo hre thin a. :-O (TS OT mai aw! poetry huang ni tho sia)

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H.Vangchhia June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM

muante #20 a cassette pawh kala nei thlap asin… hemi pawh hi ka la kawl tha reng ania aw 😉

http://i54.tinypic.com/ilk4z4.jpg

Siang = Sikul (Lai/Pawi) — in (house) Duhlian tawngin. anih chu 🙂

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Ozima June 3, 2011 at 12:03 AM

#21 tihdikna @TS a comment #12 na zawk.

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TuaiSialA June 3, 2011 at 12:04 AM

@Ozima: Dik chiah. ‘A mi an riang maw..’ tiha ‘an’ tih rîk dan dik ka hriatna a la rei lo khawp mai. Pu Muantea bulah a dik lovin ka lam ri palh a, hmaichhanah ngei min hrilh tawh!

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D_auaChwngthu June 3, 2011 at 12:05 AM

Ka U Tuaisial ‘Siang'(sianga) tih khi engtihna nge ka lo hre miah lo, …nge a mah choh khi chuan awm zia a nei chuang lo zawk. ??????

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loneeagle26016 June 3, 2011 at 12:06 AM

#14, muante, i sonnet chu rawn tlangzarh vela tha ang, kan lo thlir ve ang chu mawle….. (Y) 😀 (D)

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H.Vangchhia June 3, 2011 at 12:06 AM

D_auaChwngthu, kan tih kan tih chuan a Ph.d theilo ange hairehai 😛

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Ozima June 3, 2011 at 12:07 AM

TS@24 (Y) (Y)

@D_au: comment khi chhiar mai la ti nia, FB ah i va CK hrep a, helaiah i rawn bo hah mai ni maw!! 😛 😛

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D_auaChwngthu June 3, 2011 at 12:08 AM

A nalh ka tih zual deuh te ….” Nung tura thih hreh tlat chu” .

“Awm lo atâ lo awmin
Awm atâ a awm ta lo”,,,,,….. tih lai te hi a mawiin a dik pumpuhlum thak niin ka lo hre ve mai mai…. (Y)

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D_auaChwngthu June 3, 2011 at 12:09 AM

@28_____ Ozima comment chhiar thla vek tur chuan ka mit a kham tawh lutuk…. hahha 😀

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muantea June 3, 2011 at 12:11 AM

HV, a va lawmawm ve! Hei shooting club pawh school lamah din kan tum e.

@Ozima #21, a dik lutuk ‘ mi zawng zawng zingan a riang bik e’ tihna lam a ni e.

Poem hi ka lawm lutuk, mahse, Mizotawngin rhymme scheme dik tak nena phuah hi a harin a ulh duh bawk si a, a flow lam hi in rhymme se Mizotawngah chuan a mawi ka ti zawk.

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D_auaChwngthu June 3, 2011 at 12:12 AM

@28____ A ni maw…. hairehai…. sorry, KU HV-a’n a lo sawi fiah reng a lawm khi…… hahahaha (Y) (Y) (Y)

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D_auaChwngthu June 3, 2011 at 12:17 AM

Chhiar kim loin ka comment rawk a, …a tih chi loh hle mai, ka in sawi kawkalh awk kual kam ka-rai zo vek…hahhahah 😀 😀 😀 😀 😉

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Ozima June 3, 2011 at 12:17 AM

@TS-a hi fiamthu thiam dak zuah zuah turah ka lo ruat che a, mi naran i ni lo tawp mai. (Y)

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Ozima June 3, 2011 at 12:19 AM

D_auaChwngthu@33: I hmai phih fai la, tuisik no khat in la i ziaawm chhawm ve mai ang. 😛

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TuaiSialA June 3, 2011 at 12:24 AM

Ni e. Pu Muante, i sonnet diktak chu i phal chuan lo post la, ka chhiar châk khawp mai. Poetry-ah chuan sonnet hian ngainat a hlawh ta ber a nih hi. A ngainatawm em bawk atin ni.

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Ozima June 3, 2011 at 12:27 AM

muantea@31 Ni chiah, poetry hi a format engmah ka hre velo ni bawk a, hei misual a hla post tam tak a thluk ABBACDA tih ang deuh deuh an rawn dah te hi engmah ka hriathiam ve loh vang te pawh a niang, a format(engtin nge in sawi ka hrelo) dah dik an tum lutuk na lamah hian a rau a hnawt bo vek maiin ka hria. Lengzem lam hawi te phei chu han bawih hnap mai se tha mai… 🙂

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swiftymcvay June 3, 2011 at 12:40 AM

a va nalh ve le

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muantea June 3, 2011 at 12:45 AM

@Ozima, Sonnet hi ka vawrh lar ta khawp mai. @Tluanga paw’n a rawn post fo kha. Shakespearean sonnet hi a lar viau lehnghal. 14 lines a ni ang a, iambic pentameter(tlar khatah thumal sawm/kawp nga a awm ang a, a flow bik a nei ang. ent, tlawng-dung, tlawng-dung)a ziak a ni ang. a tlar tawp lam chu a in-rhyme ang- abab, cdcd, efef,gg. Tlar 12 bakah tlar 2 a hranin a awm ang.

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loneeagle26016 June 3, 2011 at 12:47 AM

Kei chu Poetry hi ka zir ve lai, degree ah khan elective english kha ka la ve ringawt a, ka hne raap mai…a symbolical meaning kan ti thul, a rhyme, meter, form etc kha chu sawi loh….mahse hei tun hnu a, hetia misuala in ron ti thin hi chu nuam ka ti khawp mai ! In tui tak2 tih a hriat bawk a … bakah mizo thil hi chu a tui theih deuh..hmanlai sap ho nuna tui kha a har ka ti thin…hahaha…. 😛

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TuaiSialA June 3, 2011 at 12:48 AM

@Ozima: A dik chiah. AB AB tih vel kha ka hriatsual loh chuan rhyme scheme an tia. Sonnet hian rhyme scheme chu a nei tha ber âwm e. Rhyme scheme awmzia chu entirna pakhat hmangin ka’n hrilhfiah dawn ang e.

Samah sam luat a awm em ni? A
Sam zel mai dawn lungruk duhai– B
Duhai tinkim tawng mah lo i A
A dam mahna a riang thinlai
B

A chunga chang khat lek khi a rhyme scheme chu abab a ni. A tlar tawpa bold zel khi en la, a tlar inkarthlakin a rik dan a inang zel a. A ve ve rik dan a inang a, B ve ve rik dan a inang bawk.

Khimi chin chauh khi sawi phawt te’ng.

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Formerly Known as Fonz. June 3, 2011 at 1:03 AM

poem a ka duhzual te chu Invictus – william henly .. the raven – edgar allen poe , passage of sighs – cao zhi..william blake a poems ho a pawh hian duh deuh deuh ka nei

the passage of sighs –

Alas! This rolling tumbleweed
Living alone in this world – Oh why? Oh why?
Long have I left my roots and gone
Resting never, day nor night
From east to west, from south to north.
A whirlwind rises, blowing me
into the clouds, where I thought
was the ends of Heaven
But all of a sudden –
I fall
deep into an abyss.
I am carried out by a rapid gust.
If only it were to take me back to the fields!
Southwards I am bound, but it takes me north;
Supposing it blows to the east, it turns to the west.
Straying, drifting, with nothing to rely on –
“Surely I expire,” I say, but my life goes on
To wander through the hills and plains
Turning, tumbling, with no place to stay –
Who would understand my agony, I pray?
May I be grass growing in a forest
To burn when autumn flames rage fiercest!
Destroyed by fire – know I naught of the pain?
I’d rather that, but with my roots remain.

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muantea June 3, 2011 at 1:07 AM

Ka la fuh deuh a niang ka poem pakhat ka submit ve ta ngawt mai 🙂 Mahse sonnet chu a la ni rih lo a nia.

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Ozima June 3, 2011 at 1:08 AM

muantea@39 & TuaiSialA@41: ka lawm e. (Y)

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zualbonez June 3, 2011 at 1:15 AM

Poem ah cuan humpty dumpty sat on a wall hi ka duh ber (Y)

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Ignatia (33-115 AD) June 3, 2011 at 3:44 AM

Chhiar a nuam khawp mai. Kutchhuak a mawi thin bik e.

‘Awm lo atâ lo awmin
Awm atâ a awm ta lo’ tih hi a mawi ka ti khawp mai. ‘Awm lo atâ’ tih hi a ril ka ti thin….

Post tha leh hlu a ni e. (Y) (Y) (Y)

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lushai_er June 3, 2011 at 6:27 AM

@TS: Thiam fu ni !

Online Pu Buanga Dictionary hi hmang uar ang u…….netizente’n kan hman lohvin tun va hmang chuang ang i maw ?

http://dsal.uchicago.edu/cgi-bin/philologic/search3advanced?dbname=lorrain&query=siang&matchtype=exact&display=utf8

JF-a te, Jimmy Boy-a te kha hetiang inphuah siak reng reng hian an tlaivar thei an ti 😉

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Rooney Opa June 3, 2011 at 7:33 AM

eh, a va nalh teh zawt ve. Chhiar a kal zaih mai. Siang chu pawl 2 zirlai emawni a Pi Nuchhungi Arpa hla ah khan ka hriat tawh tak kha maw le.

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chawnghilh June 3, 2011 at 7:50 AM

Phuah nalh bawk, hung mawi bawk. (Y)

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Smack June 3, 2011 at 8:57 AM

Muantea Ka tawm e… ‘Siang’ chu in a ni ber awm e.. ‘Sikul’ emaw ‘an’ emaw a kawh ka hre miah lo mai a…Arpa hla (pawlthuma kan zir ni tain ka hria)ah pawh khan ‘Siang lawi turin zanmu a chhíng ta e’ tih a awm kha, a lâwina In a sawina a ni maiin ka hria. “Sianga riang tura piang” i tih khian Fahrah emaw, mahni Inah pawha chhungte neih tawh loh vanga lungngai leh khawhar viauah ka lo ngai mai a, ka tisual ava ang ve aw….
Mahse rhyme um lutuk hian thil hi a buai ve thei a, Zosapthar pawh hian a um mah mah thin a nia.. (Y)

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kawlhawk June 3, 2011 at 9:11 AM

Tuaitea chu va’n rem fuh leh pek em! (C) (Y)

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kawlhawk June 3, 2011 at 10:14 AM

Tuaitea chu va’n rem fuh lehpek em! (Y)

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chhangteval June 3, 2011 at 3:23 PM

Va vincy teuh ve!! Good post (Y)

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Amaria.vch June 3, 2011 at 6:16 PM

Thra lutuk, Vincy Tuaisiala… oh… Misual Tuaisiala. (Y) (Y) (Y)

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TuaiSialA June 3, 2011 at 6:19 PM

Amaria, ka lawm e. I ho mai mai reuh e a. 🙂

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